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   Short Film Critique: 
   Pardoned

   Director:
Orion Star
   Expected Rating: PG due to adult concepts
   Distribution: No Exclusive Distribution
   Budget: $20
   Genre: Art Cinema

   Running Time: 6 minutes

   Release Dates: October 1, 2005
   Website: http://www.startribecinema.com
   Trailer: Click Here
   Review Date: March 15, 2006
   Reviewed By: Monika DeLeeuw-Taylor

Final Score:
8.7
"But the chief and worse pain may not be in bodily suffering, but in one knowing for certain that in an hour, then ten minutes, then half a minute, and then now, at that very moment, the soul will leave the body and that one will cease to be a man. And that's bound to happen. The worse part of it is that it's certain."
-Fyodor Dostoevsky, "The Idiot"

For centuries, mankind has struggled with questions of crime and punishment. What is the most appropriate punishment to fit the crime, and how should it be meted out? Should revenge be factored into the equation, or must the sentence be cold and detached? And, of course, which course of action is more humane, or do certain criminals not deserve even that much consideration?

There are perhaps few hot-button issues today more volatile than the death penalty -- probably because of the fact that it is marked by such finality. Movies such as Dead Man Walking, Monster's Ball, The Life of David Gale, and True Crime have examined this issue. Sometimes with a clear message, sometimes with a less easy conclusion -- because no one can be absolutely certain about life and death.

This short film tells a story in pictures, while an excerpt from the first chapter of Fyodor Dostoevsky's book "The Idiot" plays over as narration. The images, however, are not what one might expect from the topic discussed in the narration. It shows a young man going to a pet store, buying two mice, and then taking them home to feed to his pet snake. At first, this may not appear to have anything to do with the theme of the film, but it soon becomes clear that, in some allegorical sense, this young man is thinking through all these issues that Dostoevsky wrote about. He begins to consider the rat's condition; how it must feel to stare death in the face, and then how it must feel to be pardoned.

The the deadly visage of the snake
acts as a counterpoint...
...to the life shown through
a simple mouse.

Content
The editing for this film was very good - there were some great juxtapositions of images that matched very well with the narration. There are also some great visual juxtapositions in the filml. For instance, when the main character buys the mice at the pet store, they are put into boxes that bear the logo, "I'm going home!" A rather ironic twist of fate, considering what's waiting for them when they get "home."

My only issue was with the voice acting. With such a deep subject as that discussed in this film, it's important that the narration match the feeling. Sometimes it did, but occasionally I found myself pulled out of the emotion of the movie and thinking about the voice inflection of the narrator. In a film that depends so heavily on narration, it's vital that that narration enhance the film and not detract from it. It may be beneficial to find professional radio or voice talent to do the voice-over - someone who is used to speaking and reading dialogue may give a much smoother read. Of course, that will cost a lot more money, but in the long run it may be worth it if it helps your final product.

Visual Look
The visual look on this film was amazing. First, it was shot in black and white -- the trademark of art house type movies. But this look helped enhance the simplicity of the film. Especially considering the subject matter, color would have been far too overwhelming. Also, the footage was 'damaged' to give it a grainy look, and a classic black vignette that also gave it the feel of an old film. Once again, this serves to enhance the feel of the film -- it is an interesting look that gets the audience to pay attention. The camerawork was mostly handheld -- this matched well with the grainy quality of the film.

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